Monday, March 12, 2018

Project Revison Week 7 Part 2


3 Editing challenges (part 2):
For this part 2 revision, I decided to choose out of the lower order editing challenges because they make an essay better than before in making it more interesting. I also wanted to edit something different in my essay than last week.
1)      Sentence length
For this section, I didn’t exactly focus on the length of the sentence but on how it sounded, like transitions.
2)      Slow down and read out loud when you proofread
I chose to do this in order to catch any past mistakes I had not caught yet.
3)      Comment wall
I chose to go back and see what the people said to fix on the comment wall.

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