Project Revision: second round Week 12

1)      Specific Textual support

·         I got rid of one quote that didn’t fit into my argument and replaced it with one that did fit.

2)      Slow down and read out loud when you proofread

·         I did this and found that I needed to focus on one thing and changed some things. For example: how this new quote talked about the corrupt government and its poetic justice.

3)      Comment Wall

·         I tried to change how my quotes were embedded, like how I kept repeating “for example” in every quote.

Project revision:
https://sites.google.com/view/kitkatstull/project-2