1) Answer the Question with a Clear, Debatable Thesis
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I
changed my thesis to a clearer one. Hopefully, it is a more arguable one and is
better to understand what I am saying.
2) Make a point, don't summarize
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I
tried to include my opinions a bit more.
3) Start strong; end strong
·
I
wanted to make sure my introduction and conclusion included what I was talking
about.
Note: I
definitely want to make more changes on this project submission since it needs
a lot of work, especially in similarities and differences, which I am having a
hard time with.
https://sites.google.com/view/kitkatstull/project-2
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