Project Submission #3 Revision Week 17

1)      Slow down and read out loud when you proofread.

·         I fixed some minor mistakes with this one, like wording.

2)      Answer the Question with a Clear, Debatable Thesis.

·         I fixed my thesis again to make more sense.

3)      Weed out extra commas.

·         I got rid of some commas while changing sentences around.

Revised Project Submission: https://sites.google.com/view/kitkatstull/project-3